My dream package. Favourite brand: Monster. Favourite Colour: Purple. And also leaves a great storyline: can monster energy rise up and take down their energy drink rivals of red bull? Absolutely amazing work. 10/10
The base is very good.
But a word of advice: remember that "less i more".
It's overloaded with sponsors.
On the side I would remove the AMD, Oakley and Monster Energy.
And on the front I would remove MAHLE.
Thanks.......I make these for myself but share them with everyone so I do what I like. I do appreciate the feedback though and it sounds like you prefer a more minimal approach which is cool.