The problem here is Lee, that Ondrej writes just as an
Objective viewer, and he dont need to ask 'Lee, why did you spun it', he is just able to
write what he has seen. Its an offensive kinda-style if you interpretate a bit much in it, but I think that is ok.
I dont see any point here, that Ondrej is making PMo looking good and the rest bad or something, for me it just sums up what happened, and he has done it pretty well.
Hopefully we will have some more like this
EDIT: This is just his opinion, and maybe many people sees it differently, so does you. But still you cant change what he 'interpretates' in situations like yours happened. Just accept what he said and next time you can force him to write something you like more, when you make a good result