Hey Maxim,
Others might give you different advice. Try it all and findout what works for you.
Ok, Rick's first rally school lesson, lol.
Firstly: You have good speed and courage. What controller are you using?
Secondly: Right now, I think you are braking too late, turning too late and getting back on the throttle too late. What this means is you are sliding too wide in corners, missing the apex and not being able to use throttle early enough to get out of the corner.
Brake a LITTLE earlier and slide the car into the corner, you might even be a little slower at first in the middle of the corner, but that will come back. You should be pointing in the direction of the next straight about half way through the corner and FEEDING the throttle back in then. Look at the hairpin half way through the stage, that was almost perfect. Braked early, set up going in, facing in the right direction before the apex and back on the power.....maybe a LITTLE too much power, remember to FEED the throttle in.
Make all of the corners like that and you will, crash less and be winning rallies soon. But now I've given you advice, you're not allowed to beat me