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My blog on the blessings of insanity

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by luxtpm, May 27, 2016.

  1. luxtpm

    luxtpm

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  2. Trimaz

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    - Format the text a little better.
    - Avoid centre justification.
    - Use a capital letter when starting a sentence and use punctuation.
    - Remove the 777 from the username.
    - Link the site on your Facebook or other social media profile.
    - Write something interesting.
     
  3. Benutzername

    Benutzername
    I breath a lot. I guess i just really like air. Premium

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    Agree with everything.

    But in my opinion there are interesting things in the blog, but its way too hard to read.
    Typos and a writing style that is a bit chaotic.
    I assume that it was written just in one stream of thoughts and not read after posting.
    That way it kinda jumps from one thing to another in a messy way that makes it really hard to follow the topic.

    Correct that and it could be interesting for some people, myself probably included.

    Bonus points for Sweet Jane in the latest blog, Velvet Underground is awesome
     
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  4. luxtpm

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    thanks for the feedback, i think one of the reasons its hard to understand besides dealing with physics it appears in reversed order than written, i try to write on the fly and then just correct typos to follow my stream of counciousness though i think quite much the topic before

    what i wonder is if ill have to wait a couple of months before i get views from google for i wouldnt appear yet in the search engine

    currently im trying to do some living from art and maybe writting original stuff does it