Good effort but really needs updating The camber in every corner is wrong. The corners have positive camber not negative. which means the inside of the corner should be lower than the outside. The esses should be much steeper, they appear flat. Coming off the back straight the sweeper should be a little steeper, you should be coming up and over and dropping down across the finish line. Compare it to this video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Dlf38QB9lQ