Ok as i thought.
What i was going to say was that you haven´t passed through puberty yet.
Things might have happened "down there" and stuff but i can hear your voice haven´t reached the final stage.
Like for me. As you know, when you go through puberty your voice changes from light to dark.
That is what you are missing right now. But the good thing is that you as a commentator and as a voice can only go upwards from here.
I can hear that you fully understand the commentator language and that you have an eye (or ear) for commentating.
As the years go by your voice will "establish itself" and become an icon of itself.
Just keep commentating and you´ll be wherever you want to be in the future.
BBC Formula 1? Sure. I think you can do it.
and i´m not saying that to be nice, i don´t even know you and i gain nothing by saying this but you have a talent for commentating there´s no question about it.
Keep your head down and just run with it and i´m sure great things will happen in your life,
But you have to push for it or else it will never happen. You set your goals, not us.